Well my first attempt at making an RP so any tips or constructive criticism is appreciated.

This yet another RP about space marines, and of course this will include zombie/necromorph like creatures that will eat human flesh and turn civilians into their own kind seeing as i had dead space in mind when thinking of this. However this RP is not related to the dead space story line, so without further waiting here we go.

Looks interesting, please put me down asa maybe, I'm in a bunch of other R.Ps for the moment, but I might be able to drop one of them.

Yes, nuke, I am stalking you 0_0
question before I join:do you absolutely have to be human?

thegamermn:
Yes, nuke, I am stalking you 0_0
question before I join:do you absolutely have to be human?

Depends, what do you have in mind?

jad4400:
Looks interesting, please put me down asa maybe, I'm in a bunch of other R.Ps for the moment, but I might be able to drop one of them.

Alright, i'll put you down as a reserve.

I wanted to make a Neko (cat person) char. just gives a bit better reflexes. and natual nightsight

thegamermn:
I wanted to make a Neko (cat person) char. just gives a bit better reflexes. and natual nightsight

Hmmm, provided you make it genetically engineered rather then its own species im fine with that.

Roight:CHAR SHEET INCOMING!

thegamermn:
Roight:CHAR SHEET INCOMING!

Char sheet

that work?

Pvt. Fluffy is accepted!

One question, did your draw inspiration from Schrodinger from Hellsing?

Exictednuke:

thegamermn:
Roight:CHAR SHEET INCOMING!

Char sheet

that work?

Pvt. Fluffy is accepted!

One question, did your draw inspiration from Schrodinger from Hellsing?

if it's the movie van hellsing then I have no idea who you're talking about. if it's the manga, haven't read much of it yet so I still have no idea what you're talking about.

thegamermn:

Exictednuke:

Pvt. Fluffy is accepted!

One question, did your draw inspiration from Schrodinger from Hellsing?

if it's the movie van hellsing then I have no idea who you're talking about. if it's the manga, haven't read much of it yet so I still have no idea what you're talking about.

I mean from the anime or the magna, or in other words this guy.

Exictednuke:

thegamermn:

Exictednuke:

Pvt. Fluffy is accepted!

One question, did your draw inspiration from Schrodinger from Hellsing?

if it's the movie van hellsing then I have no idea who you're talking about. if it's the manga, haven't read much of it yet so I still have no idea what you're talking about.

I mean from the anime or the magna, or in other words this guy.

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Ah...no.

...*Snrk* I just got the Schrodinger joke thing XD

Here is my sheet, let me know if I have to change anything please.

jad4400:
Here is my sheet, let me know if I have to change anything please.

My Sheet

Sounds good, you're in.

A small update for all of you, we will start once i return from school tomorrow. Is that okay with everyone here?

Count me in(On another note, Dead Space was cool.)

Character sheet
Name: Billy Gary Smith, the Third

Nickname: Romeo

Rank: Private

Age: 21

Appearance:Cacasian Male, About 5-7(height), average weight, Brown hair, Brown eyes

Role: Non specialised(basic infantry)

Weapons: Primary:Modified Xum 4(Fire rate slightly tweaked, set to 3 bullet bursts, Laser-sight/Flashlight attached)
Secondary: Titanium combat knife

Armor:Minotaur

Personality: Complacent yet self sufficient. Clear headed most of the time. Comprehends the need for a chain of command. Slightly pestimistic, slightly paranoid.

Bio: "Romeo" came from a childhood of poverty. Due to not being able to afford a college education, he enlisted as a last ditch effort to turn a pay check. The marines accepted his application, and soon he was in basic.

Other Notes: Augmentation: Optical implant, left eye(used for targeting)

If there is a problem with this please tell me and I will change it.

TheGreatCoolEnergy:
*snip*

Accepted, i shall put you on the list once i return from the store!

Side note: locking the Xum 4, we need some heavy weapons!

Another side note: Adding the combat knife to the secondary weapons list.

Name: Strenon Tash

Nickname: Twig

Rank: Corporal

Age: 43

Appearance: 5' 6", Gaunt, Has complete heterochromia(1 brown eye, 1 blue eye)

Role: Heavy Weapons
Weapons: Annihilator, Rivet Saw (has overload switch to cause it to self destruct

Armor: Titan

Personality: Timid, Polite

Bio: He was always boy in a small, shy boy and had trouble making friends. He was so ridiculed in high school that he decided to leave his home and enlist. He became a character at the academy as the tiny kid who took up heavy weapons. One of Owen's associates introduced him to Tash as a joke, but Owen saw potential. He was enlisted in Owen's unit 5 years ago and rose up to Corporal 2 years ago.

Other Notes: Wears large, black framed glasses. Is a stereotypical "nerd"

Hope you like this!

boboffire:
Name: Strenon Tash

Nickname: Twig

Rank: Corporal

Age: 43

Appearance: 5' 6", Gaunt, Has complete heterochromia(1 brown eye, 1 blue eye)

Role: Heavy Weapons
Weapons: Annihilator, Rivet Saw (has overload switch to cause it to self destruct

Armor: Titan

Personality: Timid, Polite

Bio: He was always boy in a small, shy boy and had trouble making friends. He was so ridiculed in high school that he decided to leave his home and enlist. He became a character at the academy as the tiny kid who took up heavy weapons. One of Owen's associates introduced him to Tash as a joke, but Owen saw potential. He was enlisted in Owen's unit 5 years ago and rose up to Corporal 2 years ago.

Other Notes: Wears large, black framed glasses. Is a stereotypical "nerd"

Hope you like this!

I do like it but i have two questoins about the self destruct switch.

1) is it on both weapons?
2) how large of an explosion are we talking about?

Exictednuke:

boboffire:
Name: Strenon Tash

Nickname: Twig

Rank: Corporal

Age: 43

Appearance: 5' 6", Gaunt, Has complete heterochromia(1 brown eye, 1 blue eye)

Role: Heavy Weapons
Weapons: Annihilator, Rivet Saw (has overload switch to cause it to self destruct

Armor: Titan

Personality: Timid, Polite

Bio: He was always boy in a small, shy boy and had trouble making friends. He was so ridiculed in high school that he decided to leave his home and enlist. He became a character at the academy as the tiny kid who took up heavy weapons. One of Owen's associates introduced him to Tash as a joke, but Owen saw potential. He was enlisted in Owen's unit 5 years ago and rose up to Corporal 2 years ago.

Other Notes: Wears large, black framed glasses. Is a stereotypical "nerd"

Hope you like this!

I do like it but i have two questoins about the self destruct switch.

1) is it one both weapons?
2) how large of an explosion are we talking about?

1) Only the rivet saw
2) Small, only about 5 feet

boboffire:

Exictednuke:

boboffire:
*snip*

I do like it but i have two questoins about the self destruct switch.

1) is it one both weapons?
2) how large of an explosion are we talking about?

1) Only the rivet saw
2) Small, only about 5 feet

Alright that's good, you are accepted.

So lets see, we have a cold blooded killer, a cyborg, a nerd, a fresh recruit, and a cat boy...Team Strange has been assembled!

In other news.

The Xum 4 has been updated to a thirty round magazine along with the Xum 3 now has a 15 round clip, the Xum 4 is now locked along with the katana due to reasons of over use, and thanks to TheGreatCoolEnergy a new melee weapon shall be added to the list later.

Can I switch my weapon, so insted of having a katana I have the gravily sledge please.

jad4400:
Can I switch my weapon, so insted of having a katana I have the gravily sledge please.

Absolutely, update your sheet and I'll re-post in the accepted characters list once you do that.

Name: (Forename Withheld) Rice
Nickname: Scarecrow

Rank: Corporal

Age: 27

Appearance: 5' 11", athletic built. Short, jet black hair.

Role: Covert Ops.

Weapons: Xum 3 w./silencer and 2x optical scope.

Armor: Hydra w./dual optics (Night Vision and Thermal), Titanium Combat Knife

Personality: Mute. As such, is very withdrawn and not very social. Performs assignments with brutal efficiency. Despite his utter lack of hesitation to kill enemy combatants, he will never harm a civvy.

Bio: Not much is known about Scarecrow. Not even his first name. He was drafted into service, and was chosen for top secret covert and black ops. Born a mute, he communicates through writing and signs. His tendency to disappear from base due to assignments and return several days later gave him a very mysterious reputation in the corp.

Other Notes: Nothing.

Sentinel10:
Name: (Forename Withheld) Rice
Nickname: Scarecrow

Rank: Corporal

Age: 27

Appearance: 5' 11", athletic built. Short, jet black hair.

Role: Covert Ops.

Weapons: Xum 3 w./silencer and 2x optical scope.

Armor: Hydra w./dual optics (Night Vision and Thermal)

Personality: Mute. As such, is very withdrawn and not very social. Performs assignments with brutal efficiency. Despite his utter lack of hesitation to kill enemy combatants, he will never harm a civvy.

Bio: Not much is known about Scarecrow. Not even his first name. He was drafted into service, and was chosen for top secret covert and black ops. Born a mute, he communicates through writing and signs. His tendency to disappear from base due to assignments and return several days later gave him a very mysterious reputation in the corp.

Other Notes: Nothing.

Accepted, but you didn't include a melee weapon. you should probably add one in, it's going to help in the close quarters situations.

Oi, nuke, I tweaked my sheet a bit, still good?

Uhm. I would like to throw my hat in the ring. My sheet will be up in a bit. Right now i have school i must attend.

Edit: My character is going to be a recon/sapper(demolitions) type. Using the shotgun, a tactical knife, and the hydra suit.

Hey there Nuke. Mind if I drop in?

Also, scream if this is a little weird...

Reserve me a spot please!.

Ill take a spot if allowed, off to do character stuff.

Name: Vladimir Cherkov

Nickname: Russo Time-bomb. (and Big Red by those that like him)

Rank: Warrant Officer.

Age: 89

Appearance: Standing at six feet four inches tall and weighs 185 pounds, Vladimir looks like a regular frankenstein monster. His body is cover with small surgical scars that speak of replaced limbs. He has stoic blue/grey eyes, a perpetually bald head (due to an explosion), and still holds the basic resemblance of his youth. His eye brows are black over his flat nose, beat down from too many fights. His hands are like paws, thickly callused and scarred from fights and failed ordinance disposal.

Role: Recon/Sapper.

Weapons: Splicer Shotgun, Tactical Combat Knife. Explosive ordinance and ordinance removal kit.

Armor: Hydra with a compact blast armor around the vital organs. It adds some defense to the quick suit, but not enough to last in a fire fight.

Personality: Explosive is the last word that would be used to describe Vlad, the Russo Time bomb. He is a stoic and fortified individual, one that puts his job of bomb assembly and disassembly above all else. He tries to make jokes, but is mostly frank and tough to get used to at first.

Bio: Vlad would love the world to believe that he had always had a love for explosives, but that simply wasn't true. He was born to a chess player and a writer, which was the mother really didn't care, and he quickly grew to resent his liberal parents. Vladimir Petrov Cherkov, named after an old Chess player, and coincidently an old Russian novelist. He ran away to going the Marines at the young age of Eighteen, and seemed rather proficient at the soldiering business. He started out in the straight legged infantry, but soon his CO began to recognize a knack that Vlad had for explosives, mainly an economy for it. He was able to maximize damage with a minimal supply, and got rushed off to E.O.D. and Sapper school like a bat out of hell.

He loved the blast schools, learning to make and disarm bombs was a blast. Literally. In school he lost fingers, toes, and at one point his entire arm, but the military kept a back order of cloned parts for the demolition men in training. Favoring the old torn up look of the Sapper, he refused to get the "cosmetic" surgery that would remove his scars, and wore them like a badge of pride. Since the day he earned his sapper tag, he has walked around with det chord, det. pins, trigger devices, and a bomb kit strapped to his armor like a badge of rank.

When he is outside of his sabber hydra armor, he is often found smoking (or chewing) a thick cigar with a bundle of old fashion wicks behind his ear.

Other Notes: He is not a bad Sapper/explosives expert. He has just been working in the field so long that he has earned a more intimate knowledge of his explosives power.

ThreeWords:

XKCD

(I see what you did there!)

(if somethings not right bug me, but i notice we are on different time zones, so posts may be late)

Alotak:

ThreeWords:

XKCD

(I see what you did there!)

I needed a set of letters, and I've been reading a little too much recently =P

I wonder if I may, to take the role of a droid?.