Black War Syndicate(Started. Open. PM the GM)

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The New Gangland

Gang warfare has evolved in 2200. Advancements in technology and law enforcement means only the most sophisticated gangs can survive in the modern age. Hacking police records keeps crooks one step ahead of the cops, and gangs manufacturing their own advanced weapons puts them leagues ahead in a firefight. Extortion of corporations take in millions of dollars. Gunmen fight for control of not just neighborhoods, but entire cities and states. The crime and corruption has gotten so wide spread, the people rejoiced when their savior came; A politician in named Sebastian Black.

Sebastian became the elected Prime Minister of France in 2203 on the promise of eradicating the gang problem. What the citizens didn't know, was that he merely brought every major gang in several nations under his control, with the promise of being able cover up any and all criminal activity. The few smaller gangs that opposed this one faction rule were the ones Sebastian had arrested and made an example of. Any police officers that questioned these orders were "reassigned" in kind. Other European nations were soon following his example, and enlisted Sebastian's militia to deal with the gangs in their own countries.

The Syndicate

You are one of the few that were left out of Sebastian's deal. On your way to your new home in a prison cell, you get your one chance to escape. But what will you do with this freedom? Will you create chaos by breaking the gangs into factions again? Or try to take control over Sebastian's new empire? The choice is up to you and The Discord Syndicate.

This is the first time I've thought about entering a forum RPG, but this one seems interesting.
Here's a provisional character sheet. Again, I'm not really sure what I'm doing, so tell me if you think it needs changing.

Tell me if there's anything I need to change.

this is my first RP in a while. Here goes nothing

This looks ok so here's a sheet for you to have a look at. It's only a late at night draft so sorry if the spelling isn't the best.

Is it okay if I post my sheet up tomorrow? This seems cool but I was about to sleep.

ProtoChimp:
Is it okay if I post my sheet up tomorrow? This seems cool but I was about to sleep.

You have time. We're not starting right this second.

I'll think about putting up a sheet for this.

First ever RP :D
So here it goes:
Name: Shane Neidhart

Code name: Diamond-Eyes

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Appearance: Polish-Caucasian, slightly above-average height. Mildly long straight blonde hair with steel gray eyes. Fit body with a tattoo on his arm that reads "obliviscar" which is "never forget" in Latin. Typically wears an open navy blue hoody with a black shirt underneath and blue jeans.

Occupation: Thief/Spy

Arrest Charges: Murder

Tech/gene modification: None

Weapons: Dual Pistols, Silenced Sniper Rifle, Brass Knuckles

Equipment: Flash Grenades, Smoke Grenades, Sleeping Gas Grenades, Night Vision Goggles, Gas Mask, Backpack to carry all of his equipment and weapons.

Bio: Was born in Manchester, England. Lived a fairly normal life until the age of 12 when his entire family was gunned down by a group of corrupt police officers. With his adopted family (Which were abusive.), he became more and more stressed and angry so Shane took up MMA to be distracted. When he was 17 he couldn't take anymore of it so he ran away. He taught himself how to steal and became very good at it. One day when he tried to steal from a man and got noticed he took him to an alley way and brought his gang with him. When they were about to beat him to death one of the gang members noticed that he saw Shane steal before, so they let him live under the condition that he worked for them. The members of the gang realized that he wasn't much good at killing people, as Shane could never bring himself to end another person's life, they also realized he was very good at being stealthy. They then used him to steal from places like banks, museums, and stores to make money for the gang. Eventually they started using him to spy on other gangs as he was stealthy and could defend himself with his MMA background. All while Shane retained his rule of never killing anyone. Then, on one fateful night, the gang's headquarters had been raided by a swat squad and all the gang members were killed or arrest. Shane was as well, after being cornered in an alleyway by the swat officers. However during the chase, Shane was forced to disobey his rule and killed one of the swat officers by shooting him when he got too close. He was charged with Murder and is currently serving life sentence at a maximum security prison.

Interesting RP idea. I was rather interested in making a marksman for this, but then I read several of the character sheets already made. I should've seen that one coming. I'm just glad I didn't post mine early. I'll have to give this some thought.

Edit: Had a question actually, is it okay for a character to have heavy genetic modification if he's close combat oriented? I guess I mean things such as bone reinforcement grafts, implants etc. I was musing about making an Endurance/Melee based character, contrary to long range specialist.

I like this idea, but school is starting soon, and I don't think I'll make it to all of the sessions. Still, I'll submit a sheet and try my hardest to keep up.

Well looks like a fun bit of sly gangsteresk subterfuge. You can count on me trying to weasel my way into this deal.

Trying something don't know if you will allow it but my muse came up with this

Name: Alex Knight alias Damon Ryncroft

Code name: Saint (gained from him always trying to cut back on kills and damage to property)

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Appearance: brown eye, brown hair, white about 5'9 5'10 150 pounds clean shaved and hair kept short. He tends to wear grays and light blacks he has a black long coat with Kevlar and armor plating sewn into it he has.

Occupation: Reassigned cop

Arrest Charges: (I know it said not apply to former law enforcement but it fits his story) Arson, theft, murder, rape, assault

Tech/gene modification: Eye implants to correct for astigmatism but he's up graded them to pick up fine detail like the pulse in some one neck, Implant in the mind to help stimuli things like memory and focus. He has an auto lock pick depending on the lock it can take seconds to hours to pick.

Weapons: Main a compound cross bow with different sets of bolts lethal, shock, gas filled. Second: 9mm and an extending baton

Equipment: First aid kit

Bio: Alex was a three year cop having never done a lot his only real achievement was he was so unremarkable. It made him a great uncover thou since he blended so well into the back ground. Over time he learned to read people. He made one mistake he tried to investigate Sebastian. It was done on his own time since he felt some was wrong with this guy. Then one night Alex vanished and Damon was all there was. His handler was reassigned and he his rap sheet was falsified to make him more a threat where before Damon had been simple theft now he was in the big league. He was arrest at a trap he helped lead a gang into he surrendered without a fight thinking par for the course. Once he found out what had happened he know he'd die a prison but he will make his attacker bleed.

Also my first time doing an RP.
Name: Maximillien Bonnaire

Code name: King Kong

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Appearance: 5 feet tall but looks even shorter because he's either squatting or crawling on all fours. He wears a dark brown hoodie and loose jeans. He covered in thick black hair, with hair on the back of his hands and the top of his feet. He has large fangs. He has a tail protruding out of his jeans. His eyes are jade-green.

Occupation: Thief

Arrest Charges: Breaking and entering, theft

Tech/gene modification: He has spliced genes of various species of primates, which allows him to move quickly and reach places normal humans can't. His natural abilities far surpass that of ordinary humans.

Weapons: Natural Weapons

Equipment: None.

Bio: Maximillien was born and raised in a lab. He faced experiment after experiment as the doctors attempted to take the best attributes from the best primates on Earth and make combine them. Their greatest success was Maximillien. Maximillien was forced through many physical and intellectual tests, all of which he showed phenomenal results. However, just as they had been observing him, he was observing them. Maximillien managed to escape at the age of 7, out on the slums of Paris. He had steal just to get by. He took a liking to stealing, reveling in it as a "sport". He depends heavily on his natural abilities, bringing nothing but the clothes on his back into missions (but willing to steal equipment if the need arises). He doesn't like to kill, not for any moral reasons but because "killing is too easy". Maximillien has slowly been moving on to bigger and bigger targets as the need for bigger and bigger challenges arise. His arrogance got him into trouble as he attempted to steal from the very Prime Minister himself. He was promptly tracked down and arrested.

Any commentary is welcomed.

Ganath:
Interesting RP idea. I was rather interested in making a marksman for this, but then I read several of the character sheets already made. I should've seen that one coming. I'm just glad I didn't post mine early. I'll have to give this some thought.

Edit: Had a question actually, is it okay for a character to have heavy genetic modification if he's close combat oriented? I guess I mean things such as bone reinforcement grafts, implants etc. I was musing about making an Endurance/Melee based character, contrary to long range specialist.

I'll allow it. A long as the modification is backed up by some kind of attempt at sounding sciencey it will fit. And you sound like you know what you're doing.

EDIT: And you made a sheet before I got back XD

Shadowstar38:

I'll allow it. A long as the modification is backed up by some kind of attempt at sounding sciencey it will fit. And you sound like you know what you're doing.

EDIT: And you made a sheet before I got back XD

Oh, Aye. I had two ideas going, but noticing a lack of Ex-Cops, I decided I'd try something else. My other idea involved a Gang bruiser. Needs more good guys pushing for justice. Woooh.

Edit: Additionally, if you feel the need to have me alter any tech I mentioned in my sheet, I'll make the neccessary alterations. I guess that goes for anything which doesn't fit. I'll list the other character too otherwise, if a full criminal team would be more appropriate.

Actually, Never mind. Might not be able to be online enough to join in. Sorry.

Will edit if necessary.

WhyBotherToTry:
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avouleance2nd:
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Tiger Sora:
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So far these are the ones I dont have any problems with, and have a pretty equal chance of getting in.

Shadowstar38:

WhyBotherToTry:
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So far these are the ones I dont have any problems with, and have a pretty equal chance of getting in.

Thanks for saying

Just out of curiosity are there any things you'd like me to expand on?

Also do any of the other accepted people have any interest in setting up a pre-rp relationships or shared histories?

ZetaLegacies:
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yokillernick:
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Seems like everyone wants to be a sniper for some reason. Other than being the 2nd and third guys to pick that, everything else checks out.

yeti585:
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ruedyn:
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My only problem here is the bio is a bit short.

Thee are being read slightly out of order jut to let you know

Austin Luo:

Weapons: Natural Weapons

Um...What? This requires explanation. What exact weapons are you using?

EDIT: Nevermind. I get hat you are going for here

Hansinkdu:
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This one look good enough to get in.

Floris2123:
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o.o so much text...

This is one oh the more complete looking ones. You can put yourself in the same catagory a the first feedback post.

Note: Your character does not have to live in France. You will end up there regardless

IceStar100:
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The grammer is way off on this. That might be you doing this at 3 in the morning, not sure. The history for this dude on it's on is good though.

avouleance2nd:

Just out of curiosity are there any things you'd like me to expand on?

Nope. I have more than enough information to go with.

Shadowstar38:
My only problem here is the bio is a bit short.

Made it longer.

Shadowstar38:

yokillernick:
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Seems like everyone wants to be a sniper for some reason. Other than being the 2nd and third guys to pick that, everything else checks out.

My only problem here is the bio is a bit short.

So do you want me to change from my sniper rifle to something else ?

Shadowstar38:
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How should I improve mine?

yokillernick:

Shadowstar38:

yokillernick:
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Seems like everyone wants to be a sniper for some reason. Other than being the 2nd and third guys to pick that, everything else checks out.

My only problem here is the bio is a bit short.

So do you want me to change from my sniper rifle to something else ?

You dont necessarily have to, it just makes all the characters more distinct when they have different weapons.

Shadowstar38:

WhyBotherToTry:
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avouleance2nd:
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Tiger Sora:
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So far these are the ones I dont have any problems with, and have a pretty equal chance of getting in.

Thanks. Is there anything you think I should expand on? Just out of curiosity ,will we be notified when the actual RP is about to start?

ProtoChimp:

Shadowstar38:
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How should I improve mine?

Yours is fine. It looks like it will get in after I narrow things down.

WhyBotherToTry:

Shadowstar38:

WhyBotherToTry:
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Ganath:
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avouleance2nd:
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Tiger Sora:
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So far these are the ones I dont have any problems with, and have a pretty equal chance of getting in.

Thanks. Is there anything you think I should expand on? Just out of curiosity ,will we be notified when the actual RP is about to start?

Everything checks out. And I'll let everyone that gets in when it starts. It will likely be before the weekend starts.

Hey, I'll have my post up later tonight or sometime tomorrow, I would have got it up earlier but my internet died

Shadowstar38:

Hansinkdu:
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This one look good enough to get in.

Any questions or improvements you would like to ask of me?

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