Icky Relationship Stuff #1

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I think it would be more awkward to see your friend about to slam your console to the ground. But I like how it's awkward for her as well to see them both with.. you know, I see where this is going so I will just wait till the next comic comes out XD

Qitz:
The right question is why are you two wearing pants? Who wears pants at their house? Freakin' Weird-os.

I hear that!
Nice to get some info and backstory about the other characters, I feel it's been missing. Also, thanks for the comic tips, they seem good.

I feel this is relevant...

Looks like someone should've ignored Krato's advice, d'oh well.

Erin, when you get caught in the middle of breaking and entering someone's house and vandalizing their property, now is not the time to be asking questions. Now is the time to be jumping out the window and fleeing before the cops are called.

MammothBlade:

WanderingFool:

The Gentleman:
Well... this delusional rampage just got awkward...

Pff, thats the freaking understatement of the century right there...

And the opportunity of the century, too. For a kinky threesome!

Yes, this really set the scene. I really want to see what happens next.

I'm not sure you want the crazy, violent, hallucinating lady involved in your bedroom activities.

Otaku World Order:

MammothBlade:

WanderingFool:

Pff, thats the freaking understatement of the century right there...

And the opportunity of the century, too. For a kinky threesome!

Yes, this really set the scene. I really want to see what happens next.

I'm not sure you want the crazy, violent, hallucinating lady involved in your bedroom activities.

Oh no, that's exactly what I want.

Aha! The plot thickens!

I dont know anything about continuity...

so who's Mol? Erins ex girlfreind or somthing?

As long as fetis abortion never becomes a sub-plot I'm ok with my gaming related comics actually having story. B^U

What? Plot? In MY webcomic?

... acceptable, but ONLY due to the Stallone-y expression in the first panel.

Qitz:
The right question is why are you two wearing pants? Who wears pants at their house? Freakin' Weird-os.

Dude, Erin is wearing shoes.

well, there goes the theory of the two girls' being gay couple.

Continuity? Prepare and be careful Mr. Carter because we'll be judging your every word from now on.

Seriousness aside, this was a good start and I'm looking forward to see more.

Sandytimeman:
I curious as to mol relationship to Erin. Anyone care to fill me in?

Vault101:
I dont know anything about continuity...

so who's Mol? Erins ex girlfreind or somthing?

As far as we can tell, they are just roommates. Maybe neighbors who are constantly at each other's homes. That's it.

Meanwhile, may I also suggest that you check out the works of Rich Burlew in learning how to blend drama and laughs seamlessly?

Sandytimeman:
I curious as to mol relationship to Erin. Anyone care to fill me in?

Hetero Life Partners. ;3

Now...Mol. Lift your shirt up...slowly.

WanderingFool:

The Gentleman:
Well... this delusional rampage just got awkward...

Pff, thats the freaking understatement of the century right there...

I've had awkwarder.

Oh, here comes the abortion storyline..

woo for the Scroobius Pip line at the bottom. It's from this if anyone's interested (NSFW language): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_Gh8TWpQE8

I'm really really liking this. Maybe you should just throw any pretense of a webcomic out the window and do a proper serial? I dunno, it's working so far! I say congratulations; the quality of the art has been ramping up so, so much and I think this kind of arc is what it'll take to make the most out of it. I love it.

In my opinion, the art in Critical Miss is the best I've ever seen from a gaming webcomic. With no-holds-barred, full-on story for it to chew through... it could well be one of the best things on the entire internet. Keep it up, guys. I'm rooting for you!

Hmmm, it will be interesting to see where things go, but I do have concerns about this getting too deep/depressing after a while. I read Critical Miss for laughs mostly, and having Erin eventually wind up with a new career playing the bongo drums by banging her head into a padded wall in an Asylum is just too much of a downer.

Taken with complete seriousness, I can't see anyway breaking into someone's house with the presumed intent of beating the residents to death with one of their gaming consoles... "because Kratos told me to" having a happy ending. :)

However there IS one object lesson here.... if you Hallucinate multiple life counslars, it's probably better to avoid taking advice from the one you know is an irredeemable murdering sociopath. I mean I'm just saying.... :)

I always thought Erin and Mol were like a lesbian couple honestley, so finding out that they're both straight-mo's was a little saddening.

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