Erin and Erin

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Aw, no little message at the bottom of the script this time about "Cory Rydell and Grey Carter...", etc?

rhodo:

Biodeamon:
BWOOOOOOONG

i could see that happening from a mile away though.

I could see everything in this story arc happening from a mile away.

my god! you're a prophet! can you see into the future? please take us to the holy land!

I love young Erin's face in the last panel.

This is the third comic involving just Erin being held outside that window. My word, this is some slow pacing.

The Forest of Illumination?

No, Illusion. Both would be appropriate, I think. Like the condescending intelligence touch. Hits right at home.

Dat troll face on little Erin.

Makes me so proud T_T

rembrandtqeinstein:
Showing my age but anyone remember the Maxx animated series? I hear the inner child talking in the same voice as Julie's dream child.

I remember and I was thinking the same thing.

...Really? No one?

Fine. I'll ask it then

HOW ARE HER BOOBS DEFYING GRAVITY?!

J-meMalone:
I'm not sure why, but I'm suddenly regaining hoe for this arc...

I know what you mean Ive regained all my hoe, im swimming in hoe, full of it. I lost my hoe for a bit but ive yanked on the choke chain. Alright ill stop, I know what you mean somehow changing randomly to something less predictable feels like the right direction. A pretty direct yet effective way of solving the pacing issues plaguing this story arc.

Also it reminds me of Psychonauts which is always good.

Meanwhile, she's still just hanging by her ankles. How long will she be in headspace in real life terms? Will she be held there for like half an hour or something? Good to see a nice twist in this arc.

Oh look! Erin found The Catalyst! :P

RJ 17:
Oh look! Erin found The Catalyst! :P

BAZING XD
Nice ^_^

Biodeamon:

rhodo:

Biodeamon:
BWOOOOOOONG

i could see that happening from a mile away though.

I could see everything in this story arc happening from a mile away.

my god! you're a prophet! can you see into the future? please take us to the holy land!

With my magical sphere, I see, I seeeeeee..........

......Eerin having a talk with her inner child, which turns out to be more sarcastic than her adult self, and then she comes to terms with her crazyness, calms down, beats up the blonde guy as a thank-you, and returns to her friends to apologize.

Alternate plot pattern: she hangs the guy upside down once she's back up.

Third, less likely, alternate plot pattern: she accidentally does fall down.

You know there's something wrong with you story when it's way too easy to understand what will happen.

Hey, and there's another thing my magical powers can predict: Eerin will remain upside down for another month worth of webcomic.

Enjoy your read.

Way I see it, there's two options for how to interpret this. Either this is an existential experience for Erin where she has to confront parts of her own personality and mentality...oooor all the blood's rushed to her head and has taken her hallucinations to the next level.

Things are starting to get interesting... can't wait to see where things go from here!

why exactly are her breasts maintaining a downward graviational pull?

Inside her head she learns something about herself. Comes back to reality and makes up with the crazy fucker who pushed her out of a window, and they become friends.

There is cleverness some of the time, but the over-arcing boring plot is really dragging it down. Its so predictable. Even when you pull shit like "He's going to forgive h-NOPE OUT THE WINDOW" you still know he is going to forgive her.

And then they had angry make-up se-

Wait, I'm a bit late. Damnit.

Don Savik:
Inside her head she learns something about herself. Comes back to reality and makes up with the crazy fucker who pushed her out of a window, and they become friends.

There is cleverness some of the time, but the over-arcing boring plot is really dragging it down. Its so predictable. Even when you pull shit like "He's going to forgive h-NOPE OUT THE WINDOW" you still know he is going to forgive her.

"Ugh, dammit! The Avengers is so fucking boring and predictable. You KNOW the good guys are gonna win in the end! Fuck this movie."

Long time lurker. Posting just to say: I really like the story and I'm grateful for the effort you put in. While people are complaining about pace and/or predictability. I know when a new reader reads thru the archive the first time in months in the future the extra effort will be well worth it. Good job and don't cave to instant-gratification junkies and write the story you want to tell. And re-lurking(is that a word?) in 3....2....1.

Anyone notice panel 4 she says meatspace instead of headspace, or am I flying over a joke here?

Good comic anyways. I wish I could control physics. I need to have another lucid dream.

Me55enger:
why exactly are her breasts maintaining a downward graviational pull?

Maybe cause this isn't some erotic comic and having your main character with boobs in her face kinda uh... takes away from the story. It's such a minor detail, why does it bother you :o?

I'm liking Inner-Child Erin more than Regular Erin already.

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