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1)   1 Apr 2008 12:40

The Saboteur's Approach

"The doctor leaned back in his chair and set the notepad on his lap. He had no desk. He found them antagonizing. 'Chuck, the real reason you are sitting here isn't because of an infraction. It's because it occurred to me when I got this report that last month you spent more time in the Dream World than on your job. That means that you had barely enough time for sleep and meals, let alone any kind of human interaction.'"

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2)   3 Apr 2008 18:49
Brian Name

I proper liked this wee story. Props.

3)   4 Apr 2008 01:38

This was a lean, precisely told story in the best sense. Nice balance between action and insinuation. Good stuff.

4)   4 Apr 2008 04:18

After reading most of the others this one felt too short, I understand it but it just feels like there could be more, and could have used an epic feel to it.

5)   4 Apr 2008 06:34

That was really good. I don't think it was too short and for two pages it sure had a lot of character to it and brilliant build up.

6)   4 Apr 2008 13:41

"These are just the ones I had when I woke up, Charles."

That was a great line, and a great reveal. Very high quality.

7)   4 Apr 2008 14:19

Nicely done.

8)   8 Apr 2008 07:52

Nice piece of fiction.

9)   16 May 2009 20:59

I like

 
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